I reviewed the list and made some changes. I mostly modified things so that it keeps the "feeling" of immersion. Instead of "You have won the game", I substituted text such as "{0} is victorious!" or "we must surrender."
There is a problem, I think with the ALLIANCE_VICTORY_THEM. What goes into {0} when an opposing alliance wins? Biggest member of the Alliance? Even with that, saying "the Klingon Empire is victorious" when it is the Klingon/Rom alliance that has won feels off. Not that I can see that ever happening!
Here's the text back to you!
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<CivString Key="MESSAGE_SITREP_HEADER_REDMATTER_INITIATED_US">
<Value Language="en">The [f {{HeaderTextBrush}}]{0}[/] has started synthesizing Red Matter!</Value>
</CivString>
<CivString Key="MESSAGE_SITREP_DETAILS_REDMATTER_INITIATED_US">
<Value Language="en">Mining the rare isotope decalithium found in Demon planets will allow us to synthesize Red Matter. With the power to create black holes, we will control the galaxy!</Value>
</CivString>
<CivString Key="MESSAGE_SITREP_HEADER_REDMATTER_INITIATED_THEM">
<Value Language="en">Our intelligence services report that the [f {{HeaderTextBrush}}]{0}[/] has started synthesizing Red Matter. We must take immediate action!</Value>
</CivString>
<CivString Key="MESSAGE_SITREP_DETAILS_REDMATTER_INITIATED_THEM">
<Value Language="en">Our intelligence services have intercepted a disturbing subspace transmission from the [f {{HeaderTextBrush}}]{0}[/]. They have started synthesizing Red Matter in a research facility at an undisclosed location. We must take immediate action!</Value>
</CivString>
<CivString Key="MESSAGE_SITREP_HEADER_ALL_CIVS_ELIMINATED">
<Value Language="en">All the major powers in the game are now under our control!</Value>
</CivString>
<CivString Key="MESSAGE_SITREP_DETAILS_ALL_CIVS_ELIMINATED">
<Value Language="en">All major powers in the galaxy have been eliminated. There are none left to threaten our control!</Value>
</CivString>
<CivString Key="MESSAGE_SITREP_HEADER_ELIMINATION_VICTORY_US">
<Value Language="en">The last major power has falled to our might!</Value>
</CivString>
<CivString Key="MESSAGE_SITREP_DETAILS_ELIMINATION_VICTORY_US">
<Value Language="en">Every other major government in the galaxy has been eliminated. Shall we claim victory now?</Value>
</CivString>
<CivString Key="MESSAGE_SITREP_HEADER_ELIMINATION_VICTORY_THEM">
<Value Language="en">The [f {{HeaderTextBrush}}]{0}[/] has won the game!</Value>
</CivString>
<CivString Key="MESSAGE_SITREP_DETAILS_ELIMINATION_VICTORY_THEM">
<Value Language="en">The [f {{HeaderTextBrush}}]{0}[/] is the only surviving major civilization in the galaxy.</Value>
</CivString>
<CivString Key="MESSAGE_SITREP_HEADER_SUPREMACY_VICTORY_US">
<Value Language="en">The last major power has fallen to the might of the [f {{HeaderTextBrush}}]{0}[/]!</Value>
</CivString>
<CivString Key="MESSAGE_SITREP_DETAILS_SUPREMACY_VICTORY_US">
<Value Language="en">Our knowledge of Red Matter gives us supremacy over the other major governments. Shall we claim victory now?</Value>
</CivString>
<CivString Key="MESSAGE_SITREP_HEADER_SUPREMACY_VICTORY_THEM">
<Value Language="en">The {0} has won the game!</Value>
</CivString>
<CivString Key="MESSAGE_SITREP_DETAILS_SUPREMACY_VICTORY_THEM">
<Value Language="en">The [f {{HeaderTextBrush}}]{0}[/] has successfully synthesized Red Matter, which gives them the ability to collapse a star with a single drop of the substance. We must submit.</Value>
</CivString>
<CivString Key="MESSAGE_SITREP_HEADER_DOMINATION_VICTORY_US">
<Value Language="en">The [f {{HeaderTextBrush}}]{0}[/] has won the game!</Value>
</CivString>
<CivString Key="MESSAGE_SITREP_DETAILS_DOMINATION_VICTORY_US">
<Value Language="en">Every major government has fallen to our military dominance. Shall we accept their surrender?</Value>
</CivString>
<CivString Key="MESSAGE_SITREP_HEADER_DOMINATION_VICTORY_THEM">
<Value Language="en">The [f {{HeaderTextBrush}}]{0}[/] has won the game!</Value>
</CivString>
<CivString Key="MESSAGE_SITREP_DETAILS_DOMINATION_VICTORY_THEM">
<Value Language="en">The [f {{HeaderTextBrush}}]{0}[/] has achieved a domination victory. We must surrender.</Value>
</CivString>
<CivString Key="MESSAGE_SITREP_HEADER_ALLIANCE_VICTORY_US">
<Value Language="en">Our alliance has defeated all remaining major powers. We are victorious!</Value>
</CivString>
<CivString Key="MESSAGE_SITREP_DETAILS_ALLIANCE_VICTORY_US">
<Value Language="en">Our alliance has achieved dominance. Shall we declare victory now or crush all our enemies?</Value>
</CivString>
<CivString Key="MESSAGE_SITREP_HEADER_ALLIANCE_VICTORY_THEM">
<Value Language="en">The {0} has won the game!</Value>
</CivString>
<CivString Key="MESSAGE_SITREP_DETAILS_ALLIANCE_VICTORY_THEM">
<Value Language="en">The [f {{HeaderTextBrush}}]{0}[/] has achieved an alliance victory.</Value>
</CivString>
<CivString Key="MESSAGE_SITREP_HEADER_TECHNOLOGY_VICTORY_US">
<Value Language="en">The [f {{HeaderTextBrush}}]{0}[/] has achieved technological perfection! We have won!</Value>
</CivString>
<CivString Key="MESSAGE_SITREP_DETAILS_TECHNOLOGY_VICTORY_US">
<Value Language="en">Our technological expertise allows us to rule the galaxy. Shall we claim superiority now?</Value>
</CivString>
<CivString Key="MESSAGE_SITREP_HEADER_TECHNOLOGY_VICTORY_THEM">
<Value Language="en">The [f {{HeaderTextBrush}}]{0}[/] have achieved technological perfection. We must surrender.</Value>
</CivString>
<CivString Key="MESSAGE_SITREP_DETAILS_TECHNOLOGY_VICTORY_THEM">
<Value Language="en">The [f {{HeaderTextBrush}}]{0}[/] has achieved a technology victory.</Value>
</CivString>
<CivString Key="MESSAGE_SITREP_HEADER_SCORE_VICTORY_US">
<Value Language="en">The [f {{HeaderTextBrush}}]{0}[/] controls enough of the galaxy to demand the surrender of the remaining powers. We are victorious!</Value>
</CivString>
<CivString Key="MESSAGE_SITREP_DETAILS_SCORE_VICTORY_US">
<Value Language="en">Our civilization's assets dwarf those of all the remaining major powers. Shall we accept their surrender?</Value>
</CivString>
<CivString Key="MESSAGE_SITREP_HEADER_SCORE_VICTORY_THEM">
<Value Language="en">The [f {{HeaderTextBrush}}]{0}[/] controls enough of the galaxy to demand the surrender of all remaining powers. We must surrender.</Value>
</CivString>
<CivString Key="MESSAGE_SITREP_DETAILS_SCORE_VICTORY_THEM">
<Value Language="en">The [f {{HeaderTextBrush}}]{0}[/] can no longer be defeated. We must surrender.</Value>
</CivString>
<CivString Key="MESSAGE_SITREP_HEADER_BORG_PERFECTION_VICTORY_US">
<Value Language="en">The [f {{HeaderTextBrush}}]{0}[/] now possess sufficient technology to assimilate the remaining galaxy! We are defeated</Value>
</CivString>
<CivString Key="MESSAGE_SITREP_DETAILS_BORG_PERFECTION_VICTORY_US">
<Value Language="en">We have attained technological perfection. The remaining life forms have capitulated. We are the Borg.</Value>
</CivString>
<CivString Key="MESSAGE_SITREP_HEADER_BORG_PERFECTION_VICTORY_THEM">
<Value Language="en">The remaining life forms have capitulated to our technical perfection. We are the Borg.</Value>
</CivString>
<CivString Key="MESSAGE_SITREP_DETAILS_BORG_PERFECTION_VICTORY_THEM">
<Value Language="en">The [f {{HeaderTextBrush}}]{0}[/] has achieved a technological level that cannot be matched by any major power in the galaxy. We are defeated.</Value>
</CivString>
I hope this works! Let me know if you wanted this to go in a different direction.
